My spring break was simply boring because I was very busy with my tuition. Also, I was stayed at home and watching TV or doing my homework everyday but, I found some interesting things to do is went to my friend's birthday.
On Friday, April 3rd , I went to Se Jin's birthday party. She invited all the Korean girls in 6th grade. Hyo Won and her sister, Mi Jin, Rosa, Do hyun, You Jin, Ara and me. Se Jin told us that we will be swimming at the pool. Mother and me set up quickly because,Do Hyun's mother picked us up.When we arrived to Se Jin's house in Mont' Kiara, We were so late! Everyone was there, people already changed into their swimming suits and ate some food. They were preparing to go to the swimming pool. They told us to hurry up and change to in our swimming suit. At the beginning, I didn’t want to swim, but when I started to swim I enjoyed it very much! We reel up swimming match, and rode a water slide. The water slide was very dangerous because it was for babies, but it was quiet fun. Unfortunately, first, Se Jin got hurt on it, and next Do Hyun, so our parents told us do not to play on it anymore. We stopped swimming, because everyone got hurt. After we changed into our dry clothes, we gave our presents to Se Jin. Everyone's present was different. It was kind of fun to see what kinds of things she received. After that, we parted. I thought everyone was so tired because we played so much!
It was my first friend's party in Malaysia. It was completely interesting! Before I went there, I really didn’t like swimming, but after her party, I started to like swimming.
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ReplyDeleteI'd like to have seen more paragraphs. Again, you must be careful with your verb tense and articles.
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